Basic Writing Skills

I love a good story, especially good erotica. I spend a lot of time over in the magazine section of this madhouse, trying to see how other members feel and what they like to write about. I like the bl_ Annamaria:I bought a new dress and wore it without bra (as it should be worn, since [...]
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Genie:
Why everytime i walk down the street and i pass a guy, he looks at me like ugh why is this ugly girl in my presence then turn his head?
(26 October 2019)

Kenya:
Okay what the hell?
(26 October 2019)

Barbra:
My younger sister recalls her trying to convince my mother of showering together.
(26 October 2019)

Barbra:
Also, my older sister was an adult at the time.
(26 October 2019)

Jeri:
Is this What I think?
(26 October 2019)

Jeri:
I'm not distraught over this, but I am unsure how to feel.
(26 October 2019)

Jeri:
I don't recall anything else, but my younger sister also confirmed my memory.
(26 October 2019)

Jeri:
Anyway, I remember my older sister showering with me as a very young child.
(26 October 2019)

Jeri:
My youngest sister confided in me that my older sister and brother molested her when she was younger.
(26 October 2019)

Dee:
Pearl L, do you work for Yahoo Answers?
(26 October 2019)